by Uday Kumar on December 16, 2011

Hi everyone, I thought it would be a great idea if I can inject some competitions in our blog, wherein you can participate and write and I can be a judge and judge you by your performance … I will also tell you your areas of weakness and areas of strength by your writing… The first competition will be the THEMATIC APPRECIATION TEST. All participants will be required to write a story based on the picture that is displayed down below. You must write the story in 12-15 lines (A4 size). Try to write the story within 4 mins. And do not look into the picture for more than 30 seconds. You are required to write the story in the comment part of this article and your story will be reviewed and I will put my comments so as to help you improve upon your shortcomings. AND TO BE FAIR AND AT THE SAME TIME MAINTAIN THE COMPETITIVE SPIRIT,THE BEST STORY WILL GET A FREE ENROLLMENT TO MY ONLINE TUTORIAL COURSE AND WILL GET COURSE MATERIALS FOR SSB INTERVIEW WHICH ALSO INCLUDES 3 SETS OF MOST REPEATED QUESTION BANK PREPARED BY ME!!! THE RESULTS OF THIS WILL BE POSTED ON 30 JAN 12………



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sujith raj December 16, 2011 at 4:53 pm

Arun a 6th class student is very interesting in atheletics.His main
intension to get state junior level championship in next month.He has been doing
hard preparation from the past six months.Daily he used to practice minimum one hour in morning and evening.He also got very good support from his PT teacher and his friends and parents and same period he focussed his studies also.He also maintained a balance diet.Finally he came with flying colours.He got the championship.


Kumar December 18, 2011 at 12:55 pm

Dear Sujith singh, the story is good, but you need to improve your english grammar… The story is very small but you have tried to fit in lot of information like diet, practice, support from teachers, studies, etc. This is story is good except for the improvement required in the English grammar. Officially speaking english grammar errors are acceptable and does not warrant any negative marking, but in todays world with so many bright aspirants the SSB has hundreds of candidates to select from and hence it gets lots of choice and hence frankly speaking an error free english grammar will give an added advantage, if it was to be evaluated by me.

ram December 16, 2011 at 6:34 pm

ram, who is an average student doing his 10th standard. His dad treats him as a friend, he wanted ram to score high marks, even though ram was capable he didn’t show much interest in studies, so one day his dad decided to offer him a challenge that if he gets within first five ranks in his class. he will be gifted with a new watch. As ram was from a poor family and never owned a watch before ram was really eager and studied up to his potential and achieved second rank, and he was on his way to home to tell his dad about the good news.


Kumar December 18, 2011 at 12:58 pm

Dear Ram, I must say it was indeed a bad story. You say that your hero is an average person. You reflect that your hero does not show interest in studies. You show that your hero works out of jealous or greed and not out of passion. He is pulled in to study well by offering him a watch….THATS BAD. And after all this he comes only second. You cannot even make your hero come first????!!!!

Kaushik Chakraborty December 17, 2011 at 11:50 am

Vinay was a fifth standard school student from an average background .He was a very kind and helpful boy. One day while returning from his school he saw that a thief had stolen an old man’s purse and ran away.Vinay immediately ran after the thief and gathered crowd. They managed to get the thief caught and handed over to police.This helped him win accolades from the police as well as from his parents who were proud of the audacious act their son.


Kumar December 18, 2011 at 1:03 pm

Kaushik Chakraborty, a very nice and simple story. Not much complication. The right amount of attitude shown by the hero. A good story.

Pushpa December 17, 2011 at 2:12 pm

Deepak was in class 7.His fellow scouts sometimes criticizes him as he was too slow in all his works. But he never gave up, he gave himself self preparatory tests in running and he kept comparing his performance with his past records.Every time he runs as if a big animal is chasing him and it gave him more speed and he finally he was able to run 100 metres in 11 seconds. He won the competition held in scouting camp and turned back to see that his fellow scouts were only half the way.Deepak then became the captain in his scout company.


Kumar December 18, 2011 at 1:07 pm

Pushpa, an above average story. The Scouts part of it is good. But animal chasing was reflecting lack of inner motivation. An above average story.

Pushpa Saviraj December 17, 2011 at 5:20 pm

Deepak was in class 7. His fellow scouts sometimes criticizes him as he was too slow in all his works. But he never gave up, he gave himself self preparatory tests in running and he kept comparing his performance with his past records. Every time he runs as if a dog is chasing him and that gave him more speed and finally he was able to run 100 metres in 11 seconds. He won the competition held in scouting camp and turned back to see that his fellow scouts were only half the way. Deepak then became the captain in his scout company.


sushil December 17, 2011 at 5:21 pm

karan was newly appointed as sport teacher in a dehradun based public school,he analysed that his school hockey team did not performing well hockey competition since last three year,he meet other private school students asked tactfully about there performance.then he came to know about regular practice,next day in college he discussed with principle about this matter and arrange regular class of sport,he as the sport teacher he inform students about it,purchase more sports instrument from market by college fund,he regularly conduct practice ,students motivated by training given by him and came regularly,on during competition his junior and senior team won final.


Kumar December 18, 2011 at 1:09 pm

Dear Sushil, the concept of the story is good, but you need to improve your english very much… Though the concept of the story is good , a lot of improvement is required in the English grammar. Officially speaking english grammar errors are acceptable and does not warrant any negative marking, but in todays world with so many bright aspirants the SSB has hundreds of candidates to select from and hence it gets lots of choice and so frankly speaking an error free english grammar will give an added advantage.

gaurav December 18, 2011 at 7:53 am

Surabh a young and active school boy,had a passion to become athlete,but he was very obese and was lost in thinking how to lose weight,mean while he got suggestion from his friend,surabh heeded to the suggestions and followed good diet and also both used to run together keeping race between them.One day Surabh came first after trying hard and felt happy.He also got place in school athletics team and won many prizes


Kumar December 18, 2011 at 1:13 pm

Gaurav a very good story. Minor improvements in english grammar required. Overall a good story. Need to write a bit longer.

Amit tyagi December 18, 2011 at 4:19 pm

ravi was a student of 8th class in a school. once while going to school he saw an old man was fainted suddenly on the road.ravi saw him and put some water on him from his school botle.then he took him to his home.old man was unhealthy then ravi rush to call docter. docter checked old man gave ravi went to his school.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:09 pm

amit tyagi, your story is very small yet it is straight forward and good… you need to write the sentences fully and properly. A little bit of english sentence formation requires to be improved…

richa December 18, 2011 at 4:24 pm

rahul was a lazy boy. He was always scolded by his Mom and Dad for this.Their thinking was that he could do nothing except talking and talking.One day his uncle came to his home, his mom appreciated him for winning gold medal in national level competition. Rahul curiously asked many questions to him about his victory,he replied him patiently. Now he got inspired by his uncle and he was strongly desired to achieve high but his siblings teased him that lazy can’t be best. It was really frustrating but he took it in positive way and wanted to show them that he is better than the best. Sports day was going to held in there school after 2 months and it was the only chance to prove him. So he started his preparation and used to wake up early in the morning to go for practicing, he also worked on his speed . Finally the day has arrived for which he was waiting. His family was shocked to see him on the race ground. Rahul was nervous because the other boys were good racer and can gave him a tough competition. but he believed in himself and was confident with his practice. race started and rahul ran fast and fast leaving all behind and came first. His family cheered for him and his Mom was proud of him.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:14 pm

Dear richa, donot write about anything negative… talking on and on just reflects your nature… have explained about your hero being frustrated, nervous etc…. this are all your reflection of your hero…though you write later on that he overs=comes all these to suceed, but still i advice you not to put such strong negative words to your hero of your story

kavita rathore December 19, 2011 at 4:25 am

this is rahul who is student of class 7th standard n taking paryticipation in school atheletic program … he is very enthusiatic n got third position in his prec\vious race n this time he gave himself much practice n this time he is about to win in this race n he has cross the finishing line n got ist posotion …..


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:17 pm

Dear kavitha , your story is very small…i found to be simple, effective and straight forward…but only point that i would like to comment on your story is that you need to write a little bit more

piyush sharma December 19, 2011 at 10:29 am

abhay was a sports loving person he enjoys extracurrricular activities very much and use to spend most of his time in playground. one day 100m sprint race was conducted by sports teacher to select students for national race.
as abhay use to go for joggging and was very actively involved in sports he has built good stamina so he won the race easily and was ahead of all other classmates he was chosen to represent school in national race.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:22 pm

Dear Piyush sharma, a neat and good attempt….you could have written a little bit more and how he did at the national event…..may be a little bit more points…overall average effort

biswa December 20, 2011 at 3:59 am

Suraj is a an athletic and intelligent boy.He is growing up with the right moral and ethical values.One day while returning from school he spots an old woman lying in the roadside in a pool of blood.He quickly rushes to the nearby telephone booth and calls for an ambulance.He then rushes to the nearest medical store and informs others.He then dashes to the old woman and offers water.Finally the ambulance comes and takes her to the hospital.Suraj is awarded for his courage and quick thinking.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:24 pm

Dear Biswa, finally a good article… it was hard to find any mistakes in this story of yours…good attempt

Harish December 20, 2011 at 6:26 am

Ahmed, a student of tenth class always wishes to be a sportsperson and is also highly motivated by his parents. Daily running is a routine for him and he also enjoys irrigating the Stadium Track with his Sweat. One fine day, he was well dressed with school uniform and was ready to leave for school. In the mid-way he found a smoke coming from a Building .While going nearby, he found people were stuck in upper floors and were crying for help. He searched for STD booth but didn’t found. He remembered, fire station was 4 Kms from that place.He started running and reached there in Ten minutes.Fireman reached on time and fire was weakened with no casualty. Ahmed became President Awardee for Courage and Presence of Mind. Later he brought name to the country in field of Sports.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:25 pm

Harish a good story…. you should try to write a little bit more straight forward and simple ..overall an above average attempt

Vivek Tiwari December 20, 2011 at 6:45 am

Ram is a school boy of 8th standard. While on way to school he saw an old blind man has fallen on street and fainted. He immediately rus to the person and engage two road side people and take him to hospital. He got that man admited over there and informed old man’s family through telephone of hospital on number recovered from old man’s volet. Then he went to school and attended the classes. While returnig back to home he again went to hospital to enquire patient well being. After seeing that man he went to his home and told all the incident to his parents And reason for being late.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:28 pm

Vivek , your story has reflected a lot of your personality…. your nature story must depict your hero as a confident person…not a person who has to give reasons to parents for being late…you need not comlicate things for yourself

Abhi December 20, 2011 at 1:07 pm

Ami who was an NCC cadet in school and also was a very good athlete, one day he with one of his friends went to the nearby jungles to collect some plants for their bio experiment, but suddenly they saw some suspicious activity in jungle, they immediately hide behind the bushes and noticed what was going on, they noticed that they were some naxalites who had built their training camp there and were planning to attack on the local security forces camp, when Ami understood their plan he along with his friend immediately left that place quietly and made his friend hide at safer location and then he immediately ran to the local police station as he was a good athlete and as being an NCC cadet he was able to do Map Reading and he correctly described the location of the camp of Naxalites to the security forces. After working on the information provided by Ami the security forces traced them and captured all of them and Ami was awarded the Bravery Award from the local authorities and he was also nominated for the President Award….


Parakh Agarwal December 22, 2011 at 3:08 am

Rakesh had cleared NDA written exam. But he and his parents founds him overweight, now he had to appear for SSB and for that he had to loose some weight. So his parents ordered him to do running and exercise in order to loose his weight. Now he gets up early in the morning and do running and exercise in early polluted free fresh air. Finally he looses 4kg weight in 4 weeks and had cleared SSB interview successfully.


Amit December 22, 2011 at 8:12 am

ram 12yr old boy was attending his 2nd scout camp. He is active in all his activities nd have a good knoweldge of first aid. One day he nd his some frnds are havng a walk near by. he saw some smoke at some distance, when they went closer the saw a house on fire. he immediately send one frnd to call his other scout members. and 2 friends to gather near by villagers. in the mean time ram ran into the house nd took out lady inside the house nd wd the help of his frnd gave her first aid. and after all arived they overcome the fire. Ram was apperciated for his quick and wise decision.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:37 pm

Amit this is a good story…you need to avoid writing in shortforms…… like nd, wd, …..

Kiran December 22, 2011 at 10:27 am

Ravi a 12 yr school boy lives in banglore. he is full of energy and enthusiasm as the summer vacations are near. he has planned a trip to ooty with friends and family, and is filled up with joy of having a great time ahead. before that he finishes his homework and all study and then goes for trip. after having enjoyed there he comes back with cherishable memories.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:40 pm

Kiran, what does your hero do????? he just finishes his homework and then enjoys…a very simple and ineffective story… below average effort…. you need to justify your hero as a good person, a courageous person, a dutiful person etc

Ashwin December 22, 2011 at 12:26 pm

Madhav,a boy of 10 used to play in the village playground every evening with his friends.One day,he saw a man on a cycle who was riding by,suddenly out of a blind turn a motorist emerged and a gruesome accident took place,leaving the man on the cycle badly injured.Madhav, seeing this quickly called for help from his friends and reached the bleeding man and tended to him,meanwhile his friends reached with some elders and the man was rushed to a hospital,just in the nick of time.The vigilance and quick action of the boys was highly appreciated.


Kumar December 27, 2011 at 5:40 pm

Ashwin a good story!!! good job

suraj singh December 26, 2011 at 2:50 am

vivek was a teen student studying in 10th class.he was 1 of the bright student in class.once while going back from school he saw a minor accident in which a 4 wheeler hits a two whiller guy who was very old.that guy was imediately surrounded from rush but no one helps him.vivek immediately went in front of that man makes him stand and with the help of his handkerchief he binds his hand to avoid his blood flow.he immediately calls an abulance.he check his ppockets for his identity.fortunately he got his i-card.he call his son and ask him to report in the nearby hospital where his was goiing to take that old man to him.the ambulancy arrived in good time.he takes him there with the help of some of the people paasing by..the doctor immediately looked at him first aid..and appreciate vvek for his the mean time the son of that man also arrived and thanked vivek for his kindness.he also tries to give ome small amount to vivek as a prize but he poletly denied and told the guy to look after his father as he was becoming late to go his house.the man’s son offered hi a lift but vivek have a bicycle and he went home.


pankaj kumar December 28, 2011 at 8:59 am

ramesh is a boy studying in engineering college.
he was curious in doing good work for social causes. he always helped others in bus, college and everywhee else.
returning from his college he saw a biker snatching a gold chain from a woman. he started running behind them. but as the theives were on bike he could not reach them. but he noted down the vehicles number and gave it to police.
the police nabbed the chain snatchers and the woman was very happy after getting her valuable back.


Kumar December 28, 2011 at 6:13 pm

Pankaj a nice attempt…but story is small …overall above average

ankit December 28, 2011 at 2:33 pm

amit is a 12 year old boy . he is very good in study and he is also very good in athletics . but his father want that he should only concentrate in his study . his parents wanted to make him a good engineer but amit is very good in atheletice and want to make his career in atheletics .He is practicing for next month state level atheletics meet. he is practicing hard to get gold medal in that state atheletic meet. after practising hard amit got gold medal in state level atheletice meet . after his sucess his parents got very happy and their parents proud of him. after that his parents fully support amit for atheletice


Kumar December 28, 2011 at 6:21 pm

Dear, your english grammar and spelling requires a lot of improvement….you need to urgently look in to it !!! though concept is good, the english part of it will ditch you!!!

ram lalit December 29, 2011 at 5:02 pm

This is story of a boy born in very poor family.His father is a street hawker .His father understands that only high education can turn their fortune.The boy siddarth works very hard in his studies as well as helps his father in his work.Siddarth’s teacher also praise him for his efforts .Siddarth topped his class three years in a row.seeing the effort he is putting in his studies ,his golden future in gauranteed.


pankaj kumar December 30, 2011 at 10:19 am

in the above comments ‘biswa’ also wrote the same length story as mine.
Are stories like ‘Suraj singh’s ‘ of ideal length?


Kumar December 30, 2011 at 5:10 pm

Pankaj, your story must be approximately 12-15 lines in a sheet of paper

hs December 30, 2011 at 1:10 pm

Ravinder was a studying in 9th class of DAV School Chandigarh. He was good in studies and he plays games in the ground along with his classmates infree period or games period. One day the trials of 100mtr atheletics were being held at his school. he along with his friends gave trials wearing school dress and heavy leather shoes and many of them were got selected. coach asked for regular practice in the evening. From that day onwards ravinder started running in the school ground in the evening to enhance his stamina. by consulting the coach he come to know about his weak points ang got them improved day by day. after 2 months he participated in the zone compitition and won the race and got selected for district level. again he continued his practice and won many races at upper level.


surendra January 1, 2012 at 2:49 pm

the picture shows a boy running. the path is not labeled .so it seems that the boy is running away from someone . in the picture as the boy is looking back it seems that it wants to make some distance with the person who is following him.
thus the boy may be running from any person who wants to catch him.


Kumar January 6, 2012 at 2:31 pm

Dear surendra, you have understood wrong…you have to write a story not narrate the picture!!!!!

praveen asthana January 2, 2012 at 7:49 am

prakesh was 10 class student . he was keen to become athelatics in runing.he decided to run in school lunch time.and sow his stemina incressed.he started go to home with runing.he particapeted in school compation and got first rank.and school team went to national champion ship and won there.many student got inspreation start to runing and sport in extra time.


amit January 4, 2012 at 7:27 am

Rajat was born in a middle class family .his father had a very small shop of sweets in jaipur.his father was not educated but he provided him the best education possible for him.rajat worked very hard in his studies .he decided to work hard and apply for all india dental test.he got first rank .once he got the result he ran away from the center to tell this to his father.his father was very proud of him


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 2:05 pm

amit, a good story, but not much happening here…there is no actions here…. all these sweet shop business and uneducated father are very boring and sentimental…try to write something that is appealing and impressive!!!!though the later part of your story is good!!!!

Rohit January 4, 2012 at 10:36 am

Rohit who works for some NGO was having his evening tea at this tea stall where he spotted Raju a 10 year old boy attending customers with his innocent smile and keen eyes always seeking someone who can share his mind with him to answer his curious questions.Rohit became the regular customer at this tea stall and answered all questions raju asked like what people can do to become rich?,how one can become the ‘BADA AADMI’ as his mother had dreamt for him to be.Raju never went to school as he ws the only one left with his sister and he had to be the one who can earn bread and butter.After getting to hear this story of Raju and seeing his enthusiasm to be a ‘BADA AADMI’ Rohit decided to admit him in school and made one NGO who works for such Children to adopt him and his sister while Rohit decided to pay for his Education.And this is the first day of his School and he is rushing with same enthusiasm and keen eyes that once was getting wasted in some tea stall…


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 2:06 pm

Rohit, a very nice story….you may turn out to be the winner of our competition

Raj January 5, 2012 at 10:43 am

Raj was a boy studying in 12’th class. He liked adventures and he loved to have fun. One day, he had gone for hiking on a mountain with some of his friends. He and his friends decided the route in which to climb the mountain. They started climbing with great enthusiasm. While climbing raj heard a voice calling for help. They searched for the voice. They saw it was coming from a pit. Raj and his friends ran towards the pit and saw a man was trapped. They immediately threw a rope towards the man and helped him climb up. The man thanked raj and his friends very much for they saved his life. Raj was very happy and then he and his friends continued their hiking


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 2:13 pm

Mr raj, i dont find it anyway linked to our picture !!!!!!!!

priyanka January 5, 2012 at 11:13 am

purab was a class 8th student who was going to the market to pick up some grocery items for his mother. While purab was buying the items, he saw a blind man crossing the road and a a fully loaded cargo truck speedily approaching towards the blind man, he immediately rushed towards the road, held the blind man’s hand and took him towards the other side of the road. The blind man was in a state of shocjk but soon got back to his conciousness. Everbybody at the market place praised for purab’s presence of mind and his quick action which saved a needy’s life.


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 2:14 pm

Priyanka, a good story…. you can continue with the same style and manner

sachin.p January 6, 2012 at 8:51 am

Raghu is a cheerful young boy studying in 8th standard. He enjoys a medium complexion and always has a smile on his lips.
Raghu was a good athlete and, he and his classmates were representing his school in interschool 4*100 meter relay which will be held next month. He and his teammates used to practice for this competition every day for three hours to improve the coordination and teamwork among them. Due to their focus and intense hard work their performance improved day by day.
Finally the race day arrived and, raghu and his teammates performed extremely well such that they outclassed their opponents. He secured first place in the race and also got a gold medal. He was appreciated by his teacher and schoolmates for his performance.


Vidit January 6, 2012 at 1:01 pm

Ravi is a 10 year old boy. Daily after coming back from school he with his friends use to go into the old man’s garden to eat apples grown in the tree and run away when the old man spots them. Same thing happened that day. Ravi being the Leader of the group and most physically fit boy climbed the apple tree to pick the ripe apples and his friends were on the ground collecting the picked ones. The old man arrived suddenly. All of Ravi’s friends ran away quickly, but Ravi being on the tree became few seconds too late. As he was running away the old man caught him. But Ravi was in for a surprise. Contrary to his belief the old man was quite humble and jolly. He was impressed by Ravi’s charm and confidence. He Gave him lots of apples and asked him to come with his friends to eat delicious apples daily.


hs January 8, 2012 at 8:51 am

dear sir,
please comment on my story.


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 1:43 pm

HS i didnt get your story!!!!

Shantanu ray January 8, 2012 at 8:52 am

Rupak is a student of a residential primary school, that emphasizes on making boys independent and worthy, from an early age. He arrived home after a gap of 4 months, back to his farm which is among a lush green valley in the picturisque setting of Matheran, maharashtra. He is overwhelmed after his much awaited homecoming, and is ecstatic with the felling of truly ‘coming home’. He is rushing towards the lap of mother nature even before changing out of his boarding school uniform, which he wore on the way back.


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 1:45 pm

Shantanu Ray, i particularly liked your story!!! it is not because of the language,that i liked it, but because of the simple concept and motive behind your story!!!!

satish purohit January 9, 2012 at 2:21 pm

so ram was rushing home,well it was his father’s birthday.ram’s father is a great person & works abroad, both of them love each other a lot.ram ran from the school when he came to know that his father had just arrived from abroad.while he was running towards his house,he saw his father walking with many bags from the other direction,& he was astonishingly looking at him. then ran to him & hugged him


Kumar January 9, 2012 at 2:31 pm

Satish Purohit, there is a difference between writing and speaking…..donot start your story with a so …!!!!!!! and next you say well..!!!! you are writing a story and not some comics where the cartoon characters are speaking……and how can you justify a person who left his mother land and works for a foreign country a great man!!!!how do you justify someone like that as great !!!!! and what have you tried to express from your story…???!!! i would comment for such a story as “the person who has written the story is very arrogant, is ill informed and immature to make such statements”

vicky January 9, 2012 at 5:04 pm

karan belongs to a very poor family.He was very decent and couragious .He got no provision to study so he worked as a paper deliver day while he was going to take the newspaper from the the dealer, he suddenly hard some unusual sound from a door which is related to murder.He immediately ran to the nearest police station and inform the case. the police investigate those person and found that karan was telling the truth.they captured those person and praised the boy for the couragious behaviour.By this incident the locality people support him and provided help for study .


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 1:08 pm

Vicky, in case of danger your hero has just run away and taken help of police, rather than himself going and trying to help the victim…anyways a good story

praveen January 9, 2012 at 5:44 pm

Amarnath of age 26 was a district collector of district of shimoga in Karnataka.he observed that there was a want of playground and garden in his district.So he took the decision of making a playground. He and his sub ordinates notified the empty government land in his place and sought government clearance .Once the land was cleared for use he and his sub ordinates organized a plan to make a playground.He confidently executed the plan and also took the suggestion of people in his district to improve it and made a playground which had a playing field,walking tracks for benefit of public.The people especially children utilized it for playing .He also assured people that the ground will be maintained with high standards


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 3:48 pm

Praveen a very good story!! your idea and way of writing are going well

Aditya Choudhary January 11, 2012 at 6:21 am

Jeevan who is a class 5th Student and studies in Delhi is participating in his school sports day event. He always wanted to be a part of the event and his dream was to win this race. He has been practising for this since last 6 months. And when the final day arrived all his hard work paid off as he outshined others and won the race by a big margin. His efforts were appriciated by his class mates, teachers and he made his parent proud who also gave their best in helping Arun to prepare for the event. This win gave him lot of self confidence which changed his life altogether.


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 3:57 pm

Aditya, when did Jeevan become Arun????????? such small mistakes can be very costly. It indicates how casual or absent minded you are!!!! your story is good.

shubham January 12, 2012 at 2:23 am

i had written my story here but now it is not there ,do we need to register or something


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 4:07 pm

Shubham you need not have to register… i must have missed it due to overload of comments that i receive every day

shubham January 12, 2012 at 2:40 am

shiva was a young and very brave boy,his age being only 10 years did not effect is day when he was walking on the road a car stopped in front of him and just lifted him up and put him into the car shiva resisted but all his efforts went in vein.he was KIDNAPPED and kept in the bathroom of a godown in the outskirts of his village .he was kept there for 3 long days when finally on the 4 day shiva thought of a plan for escaping .at that night at around 12 :40 he saw that the toilet had a mesh window ,so he quickly decided to use his gold chain (which was pointed ),to slowly cut open a small part of it.He then sleekly got out off the window and started running as fast as he could away from the godown.while he was running he saw a smalll cottage he went there and explained everything to the owner of the cottage .The owner very generously dropped him off to the nearest police this is how shiva had escaped from the godown just on the merit of his courage and fearlessness.


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 4:09 pm

Mr.Shubham a very unnatural story… you need to improve on your style and english grammar. overall an average story.

Uday Singh Jarial January 12, 2012 at 4:21 am

Sajid was a son of a poor farmer. He used to help his parents in the field and his parents are unable to pay fees of his school that’s why they dropped him from the school. Sajid daily manages his time to read newspaper and books of his friend . One day he read the news that Government has started a FEE WAIVER Scheme on the basis of a small test that is to be conducted in coming week. Sajid then decided to work harder day and night to achieve this Scholarship.He went to his uncle who was a teacher and got some books from him and daily give 6 hours to read those books after coming from the fields. Also he gave some prepatory test to his uncle who happily checked his test and asks him to improve on some points.Finally he stood 2nd in the test and awarded with a school dress and he immediately changed his dress and ran to his fields for giving this good news to his parents.


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 4:12 pm

Uday, your english needs improvement. why second position???. Even in your story you donot think of coming first. Your story indicates lack of confidence in you.overall average story

Himanshu January 13, 2012 at 11:31 am

Akshay was a student of class 9th in Delhi Public School, RK Puram, Delhi. He was very good in studies and used to come first in his class. But he was not good at sports. He realized this fact himself and gave his name for the athletic meet to be held in his school next month. He made his routine to go out and run 2kms every morning before school. He started playing football with his friends each evening.He managed his time well without neglecting studies. At the event, he won the first prize for the 100 m race. He also came first in his class.


Kumar January 14, 2012 at 4:29 pm

Himanshu, good story!!!

Vidit January 16, 2012 at 12:52 pm

Sir, i guess you missed my story.
Please tell me how’s it sir.


Kumar January 16, 2012 at 1:59 pm

Vidit, i am not able to see ur story…plz repost it!!!

Vidit January 17, 2012 at 2:03 pm

Ravi is a 10 year old boy. Daily after coming back from school he with his friends use to go into the old man’s garden to eat apples grown in the tree and run away when the old man spots them. Same thing happened that day. Ravi being the Leader of the group and most physically fit boy climbed the apple tree to pick the ripe apples and his friends were on the ground collecting the picked ones. The old man arrived suddenly. All of Ravi’s friends ran away quickly, but Ravi being on the tree became few seconds too late. As he was running away the old man caught him. But Ravi was in for a surprise. Contrary to his belief the old man was quite humble and jolly. He was impressed by Ravi’s charm and confidence. He Gave him lots of apples and asked him to come with his friends to eat delicious apples daily.


Kumar January 18, 2012 at 2:36 pm

Vidit, wha have you written???? you are totally wrong !!!!this is not a children’s story writing competition!!!!

Suchita Modi January 17, 2012 at 5:31 pm

Arpit was a 12 years old school boy, he lived at the countryside near the ataari border, Amritsar. He had a dream of becoming an army officer. he always used to search for the guidance he required to go his way. One day while coming back from his school he found that the drainage system of that area had some problem and it was overflowing and soon it will flood the area. he immediately rush to alert people around there, he also informed an army jawan regarding the problem. The jawan immediately informed his Captain Rohit Shrama and within half an hour Capt. Rohit arrived with his troop and helped people to save their property and to solve the drainage problem and After that when Capt. Rohit came to know about Arpit’s quick and intelligent action he appreciated his smartness and promised him to give a personal guidance to him.. After finishing his school Arpit attempted for NDA, his strong will,dedication and correct guidance got him selected in the very first attempt. Today he himself is a Capt. in army in Infantry branch and he still have good relations with his mentor.


Kumar January 18, 2012 at 2:44 pm

Suchita, it is very average….all this mentor and capt.rohit sharma business are all avoidable!!!!you can just mention “an officer helped him solve the drainage issue”… avoid last three sentences!!!

pankaj dhingra January 18, 2012 at 1:41 pm

aman a 12 year old boy who studied in hostel,he is very energetic boy, now in Summer vaccation he comes back to home after a long time and his mother is standing in front of him ,he is running towards her mother and he is very happy and hug her after a long time,at the same time he is saying bye to all his friends sitting in school bus


Kumar January 18, 2012 at 3:12 pm

Pankaj…..your understanding of TAT is very poor….what meaning/ quality does your story convey??

Abhi January 19, 2012 at 7:05 am

Sir I am still looking forward for your response on my story, Sir I posted my story on 20 Dec, I think you accidentally skipped my story and didn’t posted any review about it…so plz sir post your valuable review about it…


Avantika January 19, 2012 at 12:35 pm

Tejas, a 12 year old ambitious boy, is a student of a Govt. school. He lives in a small village, Halol and belongs to a very poor family. The only bread earner of the family is his dad, who is a newspaper seller. However, inspite of all the odds, his father wanted to give his son a bright future and Raj was equally ambitious for fulfilling his father’s dream. Hence, Raj was sent to a govt. school in Vadodara, 60kms away from his village. Raj being an intelligent and dedicated student, scores distinction in his 7th grade final exams. On his homecoming, he is extremely elated to announce the result to his father and jump into his arms!


Kumar January 21, 2012 at 4:49 am

avantika all this poor father, dying mother sentimnts are sometimes taken in a negative way…but overall a good story

mukesh kumar January 19, 2012 at 3:21 pm

rakesh is a 12 year old boy who came from a middle class family and his parents think that only academics can help one to secure his good position in life anad succes.
but arun has some different plans in his mind he wants to became an athlete .and thats why he satrted preparing for running at his own by runing every morning .also he is trying to concentrate on his studys so that his parents also remain happy .he started participating in inter school athelitcs competiotion
and gradully he improves his ability .
and then then at last his hard work pays and he is elected for national level athletics competion fior represnting his state u.p . he parrform realy well nad get 3 place . and his parents were also happy and proud of him .


Kumar January 21, 2012 at 4:51 am

Mukesh, when did rakesh become Arun???? and why 3rd position???why not 1st position???? needs improvement…overall very average

pankaj dhingra January 20, 2012 at 5:01 am

sir i know i am not good in writing. how can i improve this?


Kumar January 21, 2012 at 4:57 am

Abhi your story dated 20 dec 11, is very good!!! i liked it cos it was different from all the stories that we have been receiving….good effort


Abhi January 21, 2012 at 10:26 am

Thanks for appreciating my story sir….


Ali Jafri January 22, 2012 at 9:57 am

Rahul was a brave boy who helps everyone without comparing his age with them.
one day, in the morning when he was helping his mother in the kitchen for cooking, as his mother was not well that day; he heard the sound of the horn of his school bus, and therefore his mother requested him to leave for school now. He was very Obedient to elders, so he rushed to catch up his School bus.
But he was unable to do so. he never gave up, Instead he went on Running behind the bus keeping in mind that fact that he will catch it soon.
atlast he caught the bus and went to school and returned home in the afternoon


Kumar January 25, 2012 at 9:36 am

Ali Jafri, what great quality are you portraying in your hero??? below average… what impression will i get about the person who has written it??? plz answer yourself

Avinash January 22, 2012 at 4:28 am

Arun is a 10 year old boy, live in shirinagar,
basicly a hilly town.
He and his father decided to go into the jhiri mela held in month of october-november to giving the tribute to liberation of farmer community. Its held in another town of jammu n kashmir, next to their town, to go there they have to pass through a mountain, its such a long way.
Due to some urgent work arun’s father can’t go there and ordered arun also that he will not go there own.
Arun convence his father that he is enough old to travell n takecare of himself. He said one of them must go there to give tribute to our legend. He got the succes without forcing his father. His father give him permision n some money. He also comes back properly from mela and with some experiences.


satish purohit January 22, 2012 at 11:54 am

Rohan is running towards his house,after securing the first rank in his school.He is a very bright student & a kind person.He has been helping all his classmates in studies.while running towards his house he sees a old lady crrying a huge bag ,so he rushes to help her reach home.The lady then blesses rohan and sends her home.Rohan tells the good news to his mom & kisses him on his forehead.


Kumar January 25, 2012 at 9:36 am

Satish, too small!!! No objective behind the story!!!! below average

Tasmin Banu January 22, 2012 at 2:46 pm

Rajiv,a very helpful and sincere boy of the class, one day, while he was playing in the school ground he saw one of his classmate badly got injured while he was playing football with his friends.Rajiv within no time ran to him.He carried him quickly in order to give him first aid.He even informed his Class teacher and with his help, the parent of the injured student was informed and the student was taken to the nearby hospital.This way Rajiv helped his classmate while other student stood there in panic.


Kumar January 25, 2012 at 9:39 am

Tasmin, a good story..

Rahul Singh January 22, 2012 at 5:42 pm

Amit was a very sincere student and a good sportsman. He was in Class Vth and his school sports day was coming up. He was very keen to take part but his parents were planning a visit to their relatives. Amit wanted to go with them but he also wanted to take part in race as he had worked bery hard for it. He told his parents about the situation. They readily agreed to Amit’s request and postponed their trip. They also witnessed the sports meet and motivated their son. Amit was very happy about this.


Jai ram January 24, 2012 at 6:16 pm

Ram was a student of 6th class .while coming from playground to his class after games period he was his english teacher fell acidentaly on the floor he ran to him ,help his teacher to stand again,he pick the notebook which was fallen during incident,he took out waterbottle from teacher bag gave it to her.and help her to reach the staff room by caring notebook.
Then came back to his class.


Kumar January 25, 2012 at 9:51 am

Jai ram below average….your story is too small.

Jai ram January 24, 2012 at 6:18 pm

Ram was a student of 8th class .while coming from playground to his class after games period he was his english teacher fell acidentaly on the floor he ran to him ,help his teacher to stand again,he pick the notebook which was fallen during incident,he took out waterbottle from teacher bag gave it to her.and help her to reach the staff room by caring notebook.
Then came back to his class.


pranay January 25, 2012 at 6:35 am



Kumar January 25, 2012 at 9:52 am

Pranay, an above average story

Avinash January 25, 2012 at 12:00 pm

Sir u missed my story plz sir give u comment on my story


MAHI January 26, 2012 at 8:40 am

Raju was studying in 6 class.he use to watch the child in slumm area while daily going to school.he asked to one of the boy and came to know that they all wanted to study but were not able due to financial crisis. Raju decided to do something for them and daily while in his playtime ,use to go to the childrens with his books.he did it on regular basis though it was tiring but his helping nature was continouasly propelling him to share as much as possible.he passed his exam with second in class and given a small prize on the annual function.He requested for mike and appraised his teacher to provide free education to those child,which they promised to look out.KUMAR JI SMHW I WROTE THIS STORY BUT UR COMMENTS ARE ALWAYS WELCOMED.


Kumar January 26, 2012 at 2:23 pm

Mahi, its an average story… what is the relevance of the picture to your story….and why is raju second in class

Prateek January 28, 2012 at 5:45 am

Ashok,a 6 year old boy from delhi was fractured in one of his right leg.He always feel peety about his condition sitting alone in a corner while watching his friends playing football in the day the ball came to his side he tried to catch it but unfortunately was not able to catch.all of the boys started making fun of him.He then onwards starting exercise and little bit running practise and one day he came to the ground and came with flying colors.


KUMAR January 29, 2012 at 3:45 am

Prateek needs a lot of improvement…plz go through all the stories and my comments to them

Avantika January 28, 2012 at 5:59 am

Thank you so much for your valuable reply. I would be highly obliged if you could guide me where and how I can improve further? Awaiting your reply.



avinash January 28, 2012 at 4:13 pm

it is mandatory to mention the occupation of hero/heroin in TAT?


avinash January 28, 2012 at 4:16 pm

in pp&dt, should one write a story on totally different idea but similar to theme?


pranav January 28, 2012 at 5:22 pm

Rakesh was a young boy.He belonged to a poor background.His father was a poor farmer.Rakesh wanted to study but his poor background prevented him from doing so.The burning desire to study was always within him so he started working at a doctors place.There he used to do house hold chores and in the free time use to study whatever book were available there.Seeing his dedication doctor was very impressed and he got him enrolled in a school.After working hard Rakesh finally became a doctor and lead a good life.


KUMAR January 29, 2012 at 3:55 am

Pranav, having a bigger picture is good, but dont you think it must have some connection to the picture????? just because a boy was shown you just cant write success in his life…if what you say is correct then we can prepare 12 sotries before the SSB and just write them in the TAT immaterial of the picture?!?!??

pranav January 28, 2012 at 5:30 pm

Sir please help me with u’r valuable comments.
Sir I also wanted to enquire that can we drift from the usual story pattern that is in the picture.As in here we are seeing that the boy is running.So cant we connect it with his success in life and do we have to connect it with his success at playground only.After all we are trying to get the bigger picture.
Please help me with this regard..
Thanking you.


pranav January 29, 2012 at 5:38 am

Ok sir…you are right..thank u for giving advice..


Abhi February 2, 2012 at 6:44 am

Congrts Ashwin…
Kumar sir as you mentioned in the result that stories of those PEOPLE who have submitted twice are not taken into consideration and you have mentioned me there, I would like to tell that I’ve submitted my story only once after that I posted to get your response on my story and after that 3rd time I posted for knowing the result but I posted my story only once..
Sir do you think the story written by me is good enough to be selected in SSB Psychological test..? I’m very curious to know.. Thanks


KUMAR February 2, 2012 at 7:39 am

Abhi, your story was good and with proper guidance you will surely make it!!!

dinesh February 2, 2012 at 12:54 pm

Sir,thanks for selecting me in best five.You & NJ boosted me a lot.


Abhi February 2, 2012 at 1:45 pm

Thank you very much sir…. I’ll try to improve my writing in the upcoming PPT’s…


Srijith February 24, 2012 at 3:04 am

Thank you sir.I will concentrate more on grammar parts.


Bhushan March 3, 2012 at 4:33 am

Sagar a student of 9th class.He is sincere and helping boy and also good in studies.he always like to participate in extra curricular activities. On the sport day of the school he has to go to the school he missed his school bus but being an athlete
he managed to reach the destination in time.though the competition is tough he finishes the race at first place.after wining the race and receiving the trophy he rushed to home as he is very eager to show his achievement to his parents.


Kartikey Bajpai March 12, 2012 at 4:01 pm

Rahul was a 6th class student, on a vary morning in school he read a notice on the notice board that there will be the trials for inter school sports competition where various games will be played. He decided to take part in hundred meter sprint.he gave his trials and got selected for the competition. He practiced hard for the competition, he use to run daily in school ground and colony and use to run with his classmates and colony friends. On the day of competition he did well and stood first.


R SARANGI March 21, 2012 at 5:05 am

Rahul is a very obedient boy in his class ,at the same time he was very daring and smart.every day he used to go to his school by the school bus and walks from bus stop to his home which was around 400 m. distance from his home.One day while coming back from the bus stop to his home in a sunny afternoon while streets were completely empty. He heard some voice of a little boy crying for help in side a car which was passing by him.He observed around 2 or 3 people were present inside the car trying to forcefully put something in the boy’s mouth.He suddenly thought something wrong happened with the boy.As the speed breaker was about 50m from him the vehicle slowed down and and fortunately he was able to note down the no. of the car.Then he started rushing to the nearest police station and informed them regarding the vehicle nos and the boy inside the vehicle.By getting this information police became alert and followed that vehicle and finally able to capture a big gang which was running the kidnapping racket in the state.The heroic action of Rahul was greatly praised by everybody and he was rewarded by his brave work and presence of mind.His parents,school and all the friends are now proud for what he did for the society.


KUMAR March 21, 2012 at 12:06 pm

Dear Sarangi, a very good story but it is too long. If you can write extremely fast then may be you can finish it in time!!!! You can avoid the unnecessary part like going in school bus, walking from bus stop to home , Sunny afternoon, etc

R SARANGI March 24, 2012 at 3:25 am

thank you so much sir..I will try my best to improve on your suggested


mayank March 29, 2012 at 10:25 pm

ram was twelve year old student and he was ampute and not allowed to sit with normal children. he had a dream to live life like normal guys regularly he was enquiring and learning how to walk propely with regular practice nad zeal made him to run and pursue the schooling with normal guys , now he is NDA cadet he running like all other trainee which is rule in indian army you should run only while going anywhere.


himshikha bhardwaj April 13, 2012 at 10:36 am

Vijay was sincere student studying in class 10th. Along with his studies , he was also interested sports. Vijay was a good athlete. Every day he practiced running for five kilometer before going to school. but he got second position in marathon. Vijay want to improve himself . To improve his performance , running time and stamina for long running, Vijay started running daily morning and evening he even started to go school by running. he checked his mistakes, took advice from his school game instructor and also took proper healthy diet at home . Till his sports , Vijay kept continue practice. This time his hard work gave its result .Vijay got first position in marathon and selected for district level marathon from his school . Vijay was very happy . he promised himself to do more practice and give his best in next marathon competition.


shasi May 4, 2012 at 3:51 pm

Ramu was class tenth student. He was poor in study and also belongs from a very poor family. One day a teacher came in school and motivated him to hard work and do something better for His family and country. After this Ramu started doing hard work. Whenever he got time he utilised for study. The day had came he appeared for Board examination and did well.when result was came he was one of the top ten scorer in His state. He got scholorship from government and did stop His study. Ramu became an engineer and become an ideal for His village student.


Abhishek Sasan July 24, 2012 at 1:29 am

There is a young man named Akash. He was 16 years old.He was XII Standard student from DPS,Roorkee. One day Akash observed on the notice board that there will be a Inter school 100m Race organized in the Army Playground. He quickly shared the news with his friends and gave his name to the concerned faculty. He then bought a stopwatch,a diary and also made a plan of getting up early going for jogging with friends, attend school,in the evening practiced 100m race and asked friends to put on the timer and he noted the time in the dairy, also maintained a good food diet.When the day came he and his friends paticipated in the event and won the 100m race. After that they also represented the state level tournament and won that as well and Akash shared tips with juniors as well. Seeing his friends doing well and everyone happy , Akash was satisfied……..


Abhishek Sasan July 24, 2012 at 1:31 am

Sir, Please tell me how is my story ?


Manish singh October 6, 2012 at 9:37 am

Akram, a college student was participating district level running competition. he started practising for it. initially his speed and stamina was not good. he realised it and started practising twice a day. he also gave attention to proper diet. slowly and steadly his stamina and speed improved. now he was able to run more in less time. he kept on motivating himself and continued his effort with full concentration. finally the day came, when he participated in the competition with high moral. he came off with flying colour and bright laurels to his college. he was satisfied with his efforts.

sir…pls give comment………


Venkatesh December 1, 2012 at 1:23 am

This was really helpful. Though I did not post a story I learnt a lot reading all d stories.


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Rahul was a good athlete of his college.Once he came to know about marathon run for AIDS awareness in his city in which world class athletes will participate.Realising the opportunity to meet the celebrities, he took tips from his coach started practising by running on inclined tracks,doing more physical exercises and meditation by giving extra hours than normal practise. He motivated many friends to participate in it.He too started taking high calorific and protein diet like chana,oats,eggs,milk,dalia etc.By this he improved on his timing by 7 minutes.On final day,he ran and got 15th rank by completing 10 km run in 60 minutes.He felt happy with his effort and got a chance to meet his icons closely.


yogesh February 22, 2014 at 4:24 pm

ram is in border security force of india .He is patriot and very honest.once he came to know that someone is leaking the important papers from india to other country then he ran to that person and take that important papers from him and run away from there so that there is no leaking of papers and in this way he informed to his officer about that and officer took quick action on this .after that ram is appriciated by officer and indian government.


kishan pathania April 15, 2014 at 3:10 pm

ram is a 10 year old boy and studing in 5th standard. recently he was appeard in his yearly final examination. here the day come when the result declared he stand 2nd in the examination. after listinig the result with a great happiness and joy he was running towards his house to give this great and joy ful information to his parents and friends.


dinesh April 12, 2015 at 9:20 am

Rahul is class 12 student.He was the games and sports secretary of his school.One day he saw inter school game competition in the noticeboard.For which he collect all the sportsperson of his school and told them to to start preparing for coming events.They start practising hard joined the competition and won many prize.


Anusha May 7, 2015 at 12:54 pm

Ashrith, who is 11 years old, was very intelligent and hardworking boy in his class. he is a good sports man too. while studying his 5th class ashrith had got an opportunity to participate in a state athletic competition. as he had interest in athletics he convinced his parents and prepared for the competition with utmost dedication and hardwork. the day has come to participate in the event and Ashrith won the race due to his self confidence and determination to win. the parents of ashrith were felt happy and everyone applauded for the success of the small boy.


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